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Children's Poetry Prize

The Jewish Book Council organises an annual poetry competition in the run-up to Jewish Book Week.

Two categories of prizes are awarded for those in school years 3-4, and those in years 5-6. The first prize in each category is a £40 book token, with £20 tokens for the runners-up. Schools that send in more than 50 entries win book tokens of £50.

The 2012 competition was all about ALIENS. It was judged by a panel that included performance poet Francesca Beard and poet Eve Grubin. Winners read out their poems at the Jewish Book Week children's Day at the Jewish Museum on 5 February and received their prizes at an afternoon tea on 30 April.

The 2013 competition will open in autumn 2012 to students at Jewish primary schools across the UK. Entry forms will be downloadable from this page. The winning poems are published below, with tips for budding poets of future years.


2012 Winners

Winners of the Jewish Book Council 2012 Children's Poetry Prize with Elaine, Lady Sacks, London, 30 April 2012. From L to R Kate Greenberg (Kerem School); Lucy Morris (Moriah Jewish Day School); Talia Knoble-Gershon (Kerem); Rozalia Oppenheimer (Individual entry) and Vanessa Dwek (Matilda Marks-Kennedy School). Photo by Mekella Broomberg

2012 Winning Poems from Years 3 and 4

 

First Prize: Vanessa Dwek – Matilda Marks

 

MY ALIEN BROTHER

 

He screams

He bites

He pulls down your tights

He’s small

He sleep talks in the middle of the night

He makes strange noises

He speaks a strange language

He jumps on you when you don’t expect it

He plays with girls’ toys

And should live on the moon !!!

 

Second Prize: Lucy Morris – Moriah

 

A LOVE POEM BETWEEN TWO ALIENS

 

Dear Merx

 I really miss the way you put your tentacle round my shoulder.

The way in the morning you wipe slime off my face.

When you look at me with your three big eyes.

 

Dear darling Lerca

I also miss all the lovely things you do for me too.

Especially when you flew me in a giant cocnut

And when lots of slime came out of your ears.

 

Dear Merx

I got your letter

It is very sweet I really hope you get this letter.

I am coming home really soon maybe if I come home early (I might arrive tomorrow night)

And by the way don’t bite your tentacles.

 

Dear Lerca

Will we be together for ever ?

 

I miss you so much will you marry me ?

I am really excited for you to come home tomorrow

I am also looking forward to you wiping the slime off my face.

Please come back soon so we can be together.

 

 Third Prize: Rozalia Oppenheimer – Individual entry

 

ALIENS

 

Hairy, scary,

They are unnecessary.

 

Aliens!

 

Sticky toes and 30 eyes,

They have more than 100 lives.

 

Aliens!

They’re not clever, they’re not bright,

But they can give you a terrible fright.

 

Aliens!

Their houses; creepy, dark as sin.

On planet earth they make a din.

 

Aliens!

 

But we are cruel, we are mean,

Our atmosphere is not to clean,

We stuff the earth with much pollution,

We must find a good solution.

 

Humans!

 

2012 Winning Poems from Years 3 and 4

First Prize: Kate Greenberg – Kerem

 

ALIENATED I

I am sitting

On a chair

A wheelchair

My head rested on a side

I look at the world I am not sure of

And as I speak to you

My eyes are welled up

With tears.

 

A mirror is embarrassed

To copy me

I am not proud

I am an alien

I do not belong

Anywhere.

 

There are others like me

Who do not belong

My mother pushes me around

I hope I am no worry

But even to her

I wonder

Am I a pain?

 

I look different, disabled

And I am.

But inside

I am hurt and wondering

Why did He make me

A disabled person

A victim of illness

Why am I alien ?

 

Second Prize: Talia Knoble Gershon – Kerem

AM I AN ALIEN?

 

I am a Jew but sometimes I think I am not.

I know I should persevere

But I cannot.

My days are forlorn

I am grouped as different

But not the good different, the nasty different.

 

My talit, a shade of white hanging from my trousers

My kippa as circular as can be

My payot framing the side of my face

Everyone knows I am a Jew

Because of what THEY see

 

But now, I wonder who I am?

I am not what I used to be,

Am a Jew but sometimes I think it’s easier not to be

This not my own home

I feel like I am an alien living in a foreign land.

 

 Third Prize: Hannah Kisner – Moriah

A LONELY, DEPRESSED ALIEN

 An alien, a lonely, depressed alien,

Plodding around, kicking rocks because of boredom.

He wants to play, but he’s not allowed.

He wants a friend, but he’s not allowed that either.

 

He either gets screamed at to go away,

Or chased by aliens, who just don’t appreciate him.

 

He’s like any other alien.

Why is he treated differently?

 

An alienated alien, a stranger, he thinks.

 

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Thinking of trying your luck next time? Here are some tips for entrants from poet Jacqueline Saphra:  

 

 *Look around you and pay attention to what you see and how it makes you feel. Listen to the voices in your head.

 * When you start writing your poem, don’t be afraid of being silly or weird -often the craziest thoughts are the most interesting.  

 * Remember to read your poem out loud to yourself as you’re going along. The way a poem sounds is just as important as the meaning of the words.


 

2011 Winning Poets

First Prize – Years 3-4

Ellia Walker

 

“Machines”

 

A plumber called this morning

Dressed all in black and grey

Put every sound into a bag

And carried them away

 

The gurgling of the machine washing

The television is making

A crash bank and whooshing noise

Of a car braking

 

A beep beep of the oven timer

The hissing of the grill

The ringing of the phone

The alarm of the watch on the wrist of a man called Bill

 

A drone of the lawn mower

The music of the sky

Thealking on the radio

A child with a computer about to cry

 

  

 

Second Prize – Years 3-4

Lucy Nesbitt

The Baby machine

 

The machine spins its wheel,

Whistens splat and flatters spin,

Levers pulling side to side,

Dacarydoo dooby doodoo,

Levers still pulling from side to side,

Glang ding bang and ding,

People seeing what is happing now,

Dinging and flinging up and down,

Stick bones and skin and put together,

Dr Mikedoo still gadding about,

Long stick bones and fingers put together,

Dr Mikedoo still gadding about,

Everything else put together.

Figured mikedoo doo alright

Baby coming out crying all night

 

  

 

 

Third Prize – Years 3-4

Phoebe Johnson

 

The Anchovie Time Machine

 

The shandle is as wobbly as a bit of jelly,

The tweel rushes and moves the sleever,

It twists the wire and pushes the cheever,

Ow as it pricks the chumpy stever,

The scog gturned and moved the loggle,

The machine whirs and weeeees down the cube,

It turns the tweever and starts to fly,

Flying in the air rushing past houses,

I am going through Tudor and Victorian times,

Gipes burst through the fuddle and dootle,

Then hit the flitch to sound the smutton

Automatic lever jumps onto the ground

I put myself in the machine then close the door bang!!!

I come out all fishy zippity zap!!!

The machine goes pow I am an anchovie

The year the date is 1260!

  

 

 

First Prize – Years 5-6

Avi Dayne

 

Mechanical Life

 

At the dawn of time, first of the circle, midnight of the start, G-d created the

homo sapiens.  Jumble, sacred and fierce mechanism, created other

mechanisms, started from Stone-Age … to now, the future.  We have learnt

so much from domesticating animals to the seven deadly sins, gratitude and honesty, to intelligence, myths and legends, to fortune telling and so much more,  yet … the world has not come to an end. We are machines, machines have created us, and we have created machines.  We as humans have learnt one of the most important things in life, respect and culture.  Even machines can cope with that.

 

 

 

Second Prize – Years 5-6

Reuben Rabstein

 

 

I AM A WASHING MACHINE

 

                       I am a world washing machine.

I am a washing machine gone mad.

I am washing the green out of the leaves.

I am washing the red out of the traffic lights.

I am washing the blue out of the sky.

I am making the world a darker place.

What have I done?

I am a horrible piece of metal.

I am an awful machine and I have ruined the world.

 

 

 

Tied Third place – Years 5-6

Lily Sidnick

  

The Heart

 

A blood pumper

An energetic prisoner

A rhythm beater

A moving muscle

A matter of life and death

 

 

 

Tied Third place – Years 5-6

Katie Wiseman

 

 

Heart

 

A menacing moaner

A blood flusher

A pipe sucker

A life giver

A song hunter

A loud thumper

That’s what goes on in my heart.


2010 Winning Poets

Congratulations to the winners of our 2010 Poetry Prize competition who were announced at Jewish Book Week.

"Monsters" obviously inspired budding poets. We had a record number of entries: 690 judged by Jacqueline Saphra, Alexander D Great and Lady Elaine Sacks who hosted the annual tea party.

Prize-winning Poems – JBW 2010

 

First Prize – Shelley Feldman:  Menorah Primary School – Years 3-4

 

I Wish I had a Monster

 

I wish I had a monster as my own little pet

Although I would be worried if he ever needed a vet.

My monster would be secret, I’d keep him hidden away,

I’d put him under my bed if someone came to stay.

We would go out together when it is dark,

Swinging together alone in the park.

I will knit a red jacket to keep his spikey body warm

And a matching hat to protect him from the storm.

I will teach my monster a special trick,

That when he is happy all three eyes will flick.

I will hold one of his five hands,

And together we will have adventures in magical lands.


Second Prize – Mia Yaniv: - Hertsmere Jewish Primary School – Years 3-4

 

The Snufflegus

I have a secret monster

He is so special to me

He looks very scary

But he is as sweet as can be !

 

His face is like a big round moon

His body is like a huge wide house

His ears are like a scruffy old elephant

But he’s as gently as a mouse !

 

He looks through his elbows

And speaks through his eyes

He smells through his feet

Which takes people by surprise !

 

He feels with antennas

Which are on top of his head

He tastes with his hands

And it all tastes like bread !

 

We like to go to the park

And play on the swings

We also like the beach

To pick up shells and things !

 

I love my monster Snufflegus

He is so special to me

He looks very scary

But is as sweet as can be !   

Runner-up – Milly Flaum:  Moriah Jewish Day School – Years 3-4

A Monster on the Loose

Something frightening emerged from my bed

A murderous monster arrived from the dead

It showed its truly terrible claws

And I couldn’t look at his slimy jaws.

 

He wanted to frighten a small child

But then he just got TOO WILD !

Lots of people screamed with shock

When the monster gave a knock.

 

I hurled a tattered old shoe

Into the monster’s mouth of goo

Blood spurted out and he froze fast

Finally, the monster dead at last.

 


First Prize – Leanne Harris:  Hertsmere Jewish Primary School – Years 5-6

 

Monsco – every bite helps !

 

In the monster shop, we sell anything:

 

Monsters fears, one hundred spiky ears,

Pointy claws, lumpy jaws,

Human soup, monster gloup,

Googly eyes, monster shaped pies,

A million slimy tongues, monster shaped lungs,

Locks of leg hair, a monster type dare,

Worn out toes, an upside down nose,

Knobbly knees, mushy monster peas,

Wicked brains, zig-zag veins,

Monster feelings, green skin peelings,

Floppy arms, a monster’s charms,

Ripped cells, blood filled wells,

 

We sell anything here !


Second Prize – Eliana Parkinson: - Moriah Jewish Day School – Years 5-6

Pollution in China

He envelops the city in his grey arms

He gobbles up the sky,

And gulps it all down his chimney like neck.

He absorbs the sun whilst eating the moon.

He suffocates the nature.

He smothers the world with his petrolish breath.

He falls lower and lower then cages you in.

He throttles the planet and everyone on it.

He hiccups out the clouds.

He’s as smog as the sky.

He smokes over China !


Joint Runner-up – Lior Carno:  Kerem School – Years 5-6

Man or Monster

Broken

Victim of war.

Forced to drive a tank,

Forced to load a gun,

Forced to shoot

Forced to kill.

 

Soul covered in thick black tar.

I am a murderer,

A monster for all to see

But I am still a human.

It’s not about what I do,

It’s about who I am.


Joint Runner-up – Emma Scott:  Hertsmere Jewish Primary School – Years 5-6

The Ostipopulator

 

It was a couple of years ago,

I was eight,

And I was licking my ice-cream,

At the fete.

 

All of my friends

Started to run away,

I was confused,

Didn’t know what to say.

 

Then there it was,

That’s what I saw,

A giant monster,

Behind the door.

 

It was ugly,

In all ways,

Not brightly coloured,

But in shades of grey.

 

The glaring eyes,

The horrible grin,

The facial expression,

The scaly skin.

 

The pointy elbows,

The wobbly knees,

It probably was,

About to sneeze !

 

But no, oh no,

No it didn’t,

Maybe I’ll tell you,

Or perhaps I shouldn’t ?

Okay I will,

The monster drew a breath,

It coughed and exploded,

What a horrible death.

 

My friends returned,

About 10 minutes later,

Asked about the goo !

It was the Ostipopulator.

  

 


2009 Winning Poets

The winners were announced at Jewish Book Week by Lynne Reid Banks and Adele Geras on Sunday 1 March.

Lady Elaine Sacks hosted the annual tea party for all the prize winners and we were lucky to have gorgeous weather.

The winners are:

Years 3-4 - First prize:

Louis Kaye – Moriah Jewish Day School

FROG

 

It has four flippy floppy feet,

And some sensitive skin.

It has a lovely long tongue,

but not such a long tail!

Some of them are as green as the algae in the swamp.

Their throat is like a big balloon

Slowly being blown up.

Their skin is as squishy as a ball of goo.

When they are scared,

They go concealed under a rock.

Their tongue launches out of it’s mouth,

Like a rocket going into the air.

When their legs separate while swimming,

It is like an expectant turning into a flower.

 

Years 3-4 - Second prize:

Oliver Jay Lesser – Bury and Whitefield JPS

THE SPHINX

 

Near the pyramid lies the sphinx,

It never eats and never drinx,

And no one knows just what it thinx,

But when the old bell chinx,

It sometimes smiles and sometimes winx.

 

Years 3-4 – Third prize:

Abigail Pearlman – Hasmonean Primary School  

THE ZEBRASAUR

 

The zebrasaur is very nice,

His favourite food is curried rice.

He always goes to bed at ten,

And cuddled up with his toy hen.

He does everything without a moan,

He never did like to groan.

He is really kind,

How can I help is always on his mind.

He is still alive to this day,

And has never complained in any way.

 

Years 5-6 – First prize

Yoav Levinson – Kerem School

THE DOVE

Feathers white as snow

Innocent as a new born baby

Make peace between people

Completely fresh – newly printed untouched paper

Paper – fresh snow.

You, a peace sign

Make peace for the world

Sitting on paper you see

You see a rubber

You see a rubber preparing to erase you

Erase you forever and ever ….

And you fight

With feathers flapping in the heat

For the peace that you pray

Will one day come.

 

Years 5-6 – Joint Second prize:

Becky Collins - New North London Synagogue Religion School

A game of cat and mouse

 

The cat pounced, dragging its prey across the floor.

The soldier slammed his rifle butt through the wooden door.

The mouse gulped down his last breath, the air was filled with tension, the air

was filled with death.

No one stirred in the mouse hole, the cat lay purring on the rug.

Hitler sat at his desk drinking tea from his mug.

The mice gave birth to tears, whilst the Jew’s cries reached G-d’s ears.

The mice ran freely alongside a railway track.

A train came by, a girl started to wimper.

Trapped like cattle not knowing of their future.

The mice were in the Officer’s hut eating bread and honey.

The Jews were in the gas chambers, not knowing what was to be.

The mice ran away as a tall man came in.

His boots stamped heavily on the floor ringing in their ears.

He came for no purpose other than to get way.

“A silly game of cat and mouse”, cried the soldier in despair.

His face was full of burden; his eyes were full of fear.

No one knew who was free.

The mice or the Jews, or you or me!

Zoe Abrahams - Moriah Jewish Day School

Dog

 

  Back scratcher

  Cat catcher

  Lead tugger

  Toy mugger

  Carpet muncher

  Bone cruncher

  Night yelper

  Accident helper

  Hare chaser

  Rabbit racer

  Paper ripper

  Pond dipper

My dog Sandy!

 

Years 5-6 – Joint Third  prize:

Charlotte Selwyn – Hertsmere Jewish Primary School

Ellie the dancing Elephant

 

Mum:                Ellie, come quick ! You’re going to be late for school,

                       Dancing around your room all day, you won’t get in the pool !

Sister:              Your dance competition is nearly here, practise, practise now,

                       All your moves and fabulous turns, you have to beat the cow !

Ellie:                Mum, I’m so nervous, the pig’s going to win,

                       I can’t get my hopping right, never mind my spin !

after the competition

Ellie:                Dad, I lost.  Giraffe won the cup,

                       All the hard work I put in, I’m so fed up !

Dad:                 Well, young girl, you must face your fear,

                       Don’t be so down.  There’s always next year !

Mira Trenner - Belsize Square Synagogue Religion School

I am an Elephant

 

I can raise my trunk high

And shower myself in sparkling dew

I can flee to the river

And they chase me.

They want my crowning glory,

They want my glistening, ivory tusks.

I am in the distant forest

I must be safe now

Then the sleek white lion arrives

I am grey and cumbersome

I stand no chance.

I am an elephant.


2008 Winning Poets

The winners were announced at Jewish Book Week by Caroline Lawrence on Sunday 24 February .

The judges included Elaine Sacks (Chair) children’s author Andy Stanton and poet Jacqueline Saphra.

Thank you to all those who entered –we had over 500 this year- so if you didn’t win it doesn’t mean that your poem wasn’t fantastic. It probably was and you should enter again in 2009.

Below is a picture of the tea party which Lady Elaine Sacks hosted for all the prize winners and all the prize-winning poems.

Prize-Winning Poems

Year 3-4

Rebecca Alexander, Moriah

2nd Runner-up

Ice is like white fairies drifting down to the ground

Chilly cold crystal colourless

Melting menacing wintry white,

Going to find snowflakes in the snow

“I’ve found one!”

“It’s so shiny!”

Water is blue glitter moving quite slowl,

Flowing sinking flowing suspending.

Soft stream sweep spurt swimming

On oh my snowflake’s nearly a puddle…

“Come snowflake!”

Clouds are like people dressed as ghosts,

Moving murky cold shadows

My Snowflake’s disappeared,

“Where is my snowflake?”

It’s fun whatever the weather

Gemma Oberman, Wolfson Hillel

1st Runner-up

Puddle Drop

There was once a raindrop that landed on my nose.

It stayed there for days and days.

I got bored of it, it got bored of me

So during those dull and boring days,

I called it a name, Puddle Drop,

(not that it is a proper name of course ).

It and I did not get on very well.

People asked me “What’s that spot

At the end of your nose?”

“It’s Puddle Drop,” I replied.

Even today you can still see it

Hanging on the end of my

Nose. “Is it from that dull

and boring day? “ I whisper to them “yes”

In case anybody heard.

Rachel Sinyor, Wolfson Hillel

1st Prize

Under The Waves

Under the waves all sorts of things go on all the

Creatures sing their song.

Under the waves, under the waves.

Under the sea coral shakes, the fish swim and

The water sways from side to side.

Under the waves, under the waves, under the waves.

The dolphins dive dangerously down and the fish watch as they go.

Under the waves, under the waves, under the waves.

The octopuses float at the bottom of the sea

Under the waves, under the waves, under the waves

Year 5-6 Prize

Deborah Korn, Moriah

2nd Runner Up

The River Stream

The river starts off as a stream

It leaps down the mountain

It strides in to the valley

It links its hands with others

It gets wider, still,

Until it almost bursts its banks.

A cliff stands in its way

It tries to keep the river in its grasp

But it slips away

It bolts around the corner

Like a snake catching its prey

All of a sudden it’s a member

Of the club they call the sea.

So it joins the race

To get to the shore

This river started as a stream.

Lara Kay, Moriah

The Seas

The shimmering sea fiddles hour after hour

With the small, brown pebbles,

Before letting them drift slowly into

His wide, open mouth.

The stormy sea snatches the

Golden sand from the lonely beach

As his vicious, grey waves crash over

It again and again.

The salty sea listens carefully to

the passing fish as they whisper water

jokes to each other.

Jake Summerfield, Kerem

First prize

The first drop is magical

It paints a smile on the Israelis’ faces

The second drop is a saviour

It sploshes on the dry soil

The third drop is cheeky

It lands on the Rabbi’s beard

The fourth drop is a relief

It parachutes into the river

The fifth drop is a sign

It lands on the Kotel bricks

The sixth drop is a follower

But to thousands yet to come a leader

The seventh drop is a tear

A tear of joy –the rain has come.

 


2007 Winning Poets

The Poets

Years 3-4:

First Prize, Moshe Waxman, Broughton Jewish Primary School

Second Prize, Emily Kenton, Wolfson Hillel

Joint 3rd prize, Natalie Deller, Naima JPS and Sarah Carroll

Broughton Jewish Primary School

Years 5-6:

First Prize, Ella Grodzinski, Kerem School

Second Prize, Arielle Domb, Independent entry

Joint Third Prize, Tamar Haschel, Menorah Foundation and Gabriel Segall, Hertsmere

 

The Poems

First Prize

Moshe Waxman

Broughton Jewish Primary School

 

The Wild Colours

Blue is

A blue bell ringing to the Sun

Yellow is

An autumn leaf

Red catches

A bull eye with rage

Green grass

Is a cow’s prey

Orange is a mighty tiger

That can not resist a deer

White is the shivering

Snow drop

 

Second Prize

Emily Kenton

Wolfson Hillel

The Colours in my room

My bed is made of thick brown wood

With covers in pink, purple and wite

My bedside table is also brown wood

With my books and purple bedside light.

I have a long white bookshelf

With some pictures, teddies and a purple clock.

So many books of different colours,

And my secret diary  with a silver lock.

My big white desk is in the corner

With my green desk chair which can spin

I have a pink CD music player

And a silver rack to put my CD’s in.

I’ve got a closet on one wall

Full of outfits in purple, blue and green

Along with socks, shoes and tops

There are pyjamas in yellow and tangerine

So long my friends

The poem is over so

Toodledo and I will see you later

Joint 3rd prize

Natalie Deller

Naima JPS

Blue is the Colour of….

Blue is the colour of water splashing around…

Blue tastes like cold ice feeling its way through me…

Blue is the colour of Tali’s eyes…

Blue is the sky in a sunset and the colour of rain drops.

 

Sarah Carroll

Broughton Jewish Primary School

 

Feelings

When I feel happy it’s like a

yellow lemon

And when I feel angry it’s like

dum blue

And now I’m lonely it’s blowing red.

And

I

Just

Forgot

Sad, sad is like dark black like

Night sky

Years 5-6

First Prize

Ella Grodzinski

Kerem School

 

Colours

What was he thinking

When he created the world,

And the blue of the sky and the sea.

What went through his mind

When he fashioned the flowers

And the blue of the sky and the sea

Did he smile when he made

The little white lamb,

Or the blue of the sky and the sea.

How could he think of,

The solid black of the night,

Or the blue of the sky and the sea

What power could shape,

The colours of the earth,

And the blue of the sky and the sea

And the blue of the sky and the sea

Second Prize

Arielle Domb

Independent entry

 

Noah’s Ark

Noah stares into the day

Only rain-an endless grey,

Colours gone, locked under sea,

Oceans forming gradually,

Leaden skies hover above

Only G-d will send the dove

Up so high it’s his delight

Reaches out, the dove’s in sight.

 

Crimson Hawks soar above,

Our g-d sent colour with love,

Lavender sparkles yellow lights

Opal fires, shimmer bright,

Under the heavens, vivid gleam

Rainbow promise fills our dream.

Joint Third Prize

Tamar Haschel

Menorah Foundation

The world is multicoloured

I could paint the whole world yellow

I could paint the whole world red

But red is a colour of blood and danger

So I might paint it pure white instead.

Perhaps I will paint the world purple

There’s a chance of me painting it blue

With all the various shades that there are

I’ll paint the sea and sky too.

I could paint the whole world orange

I could paint it the colour peach

It’s such a difficult decision

So I’ll use a bit of each.

The entire world is like a canvas

Each colour adds its own spice

It was really fun painting it

Next time I will need more advice

 

Joint Third Prize

Gabriel Segall

Hertsmere

Surfer on the Sea

On the ocean blue,

The waves come crashing to the shore.

The white seagulls hovering for fish,

And wanting more.

The little boy building golden sandcastles,

On the windy beach.

The climber stretches for a dark grey rock,

Just out of reach.

The surfer glides on white powered waves,

On his board so shiny and red.

Blue dolphins follow him, oh so brave,

While a grey shark swims ahead.


2006 Winning Poets:

 

Years 3-4

First Prize: Sam Rabin (Moriah Jewish Day School, Pinner) ‘The Mole’

Second Prize: Molly Kay (King David Junior School, Manchester) ‘Autumn is Here’

Third Prize: Francesca Hilton (King David Junior School, Manchester) ‘Autumn Poem’

Years 5-6

First Prize: Louisa Sober (Moriah Jewish Day School, Pinner) ‘Nature’

Second Prize: Ariel Tamman (Kerem School, London) ‘Nature’

Joint Third Prize:

Libby Viner (Moriah Jewish Day School, Pinner) ‘I am the Earth’

Yocheved Gehler (Menorah Primary School, London) ‘My Pets.’


The Poems…..

The Mole

Sam Rabin

Down in his burrow,

The mole lurks,

It turns summer

And he pokes his

Head out of the burrow

He stops, he hears the

Steps of the troubling dog

He fits his head back in, OUCH!

An insane boy treads on his burrow,

He pokes his head out again.

He steps outside and wanders

Like a lost soldier, he spies

On the juicy worm,

CRUNCH! One less

Worm in the world.

Suddenly he hears it,

The over-enthusiastic

Girl “Ma, Ma, look at that

Mole, isn’t he cute!”

He hides,

She’s gone,

He hears the,

Wailing owl,

He crawls,

Back to the burrow,

Steps inside.

All in a day’s work for a mole!

 

Autumn is Here

 Molly Kay

Big and little leaves whirling around.

Going everywhere.

Not making a sound.

There’s so many colours like red, orange and brown.

And when they fall off the trees.

They twist and turn and go all the way down.

The days get shorter and the nights get long.

And when you hear the wind whistling.

It’s like a song.

In Autumn it gets colder.

The trees shed their leaves

And the wind becomes bolder.

Autumn is here.

And

I am another year older.

 

My Autumn Poem

Francesca Hilton

Autumn comes

Dull and dark

Howling winds pull apart

The lovely trees of summer.

Hovering like the seagulls

They zig zag down

Red, Orange

And Golden brown.

Multi coloured rain drops,

Fall from grey skies They dance and twirl

Before your eyes.

BANG! ZOOM! HISS! AND BOOM!
Fire works flash past your bedroom

The smell of burning fills the air

Hold a sparkler if you dare.

After autumn winds

Winter snow

Then spring awakens

 And flowers grow.

Nature

Louise Sober

It’s not in my dog’s nature

To eat the pencil,

It’s not in my cat’s nature

To chase the dog,

It’s not in my fish’s nature

To do what I say,

It’s not in my rabbit’s nature

To swing on the light,

BUT they do it anyway.

Nature

Ariel Tamman

My teacher told me write a poem

About nature I thought disability My teacher thought not because it was

Not linked with nature I thought

Creation because that’s where nature

began. My teacher thought not

because too many others had done

it. I thought hard. What is nature? I

thought Nature is the crystal

mountains over looking the sky. I

thought nature is the blushing

blossom of the cherry tree. I thought

nature is the white rapid horses of

the sea rushing towards the sway

beach. My teacher said I write it

down, so I wrote about nature.

I Am The Earth

Libby Viner

I am the earth

With green leaves as my eyes,

I am the earth

With a tree as my nose.

I am the earth

With long roads as my hair,

I am earth

With a river as my lips

I am the earth

With countries as my teeth,

I am the earth

With sky as my body.

I am the earth

Who looks after you,

I am the earth

So please can you treat me well?

My Pets

Yocheved Gehler

There are so many creatures that I like to meet

Some of them are scary and some of them are sweet

My family never know what I’ll bring into the house

One day it’s a hippo, the next could be a mouse

Upstairs in my mother’s bedroom she found an armadillo

Fast asleep and snoring loudly on her silky pillow

My sister woke one day to find a very grumpy llama

She screamed so much it took us all, half a day to calm her

I went into the kitchen to make my dad some tea

I’m sure he doesn’t mind to have to share it with my flea

When my granny came to stay I took her woolly scarf

I thought it would look so cute upon my pet giraffe

My baby sister went to play with her very best toy

Only to find that my tarantula had had a little boy

All in all, it is really quite sad

That my interest in animals drives everyone else mad.

 


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